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Outside of a dog, a book is a man’s best friend. Inside of a dog, it’s too dark to read. - Groucho Marx
Asking for help w. new book, shootout chapter
I'd greatly appreciate help with the shootout sequence of my new novel. I finished the chapters last night and think they're pretty good, but I'd like some other opinions.
Earlier I'd asked for tech help regarding how to set an H&K AR so that it could be switched to auto and still appear legal. Thanks for the good advice on that, and the recommendations are in this section.
I really don't want to post the chapters here because they contain strong language and I don't want to bowderlize the text, so I've got a PDF excerpt that I can email you.
If anyone would care to have a look at this sequence, I'd greatly appreciate. Just PM me with your email and I'll send you the excerpt.
All comments will be absorbed and taken to heart, believe me. I value the feedback I always get here, because it's the best!
If only a couple people take me up on this, I may then create a PG-rated version and post it in this thread.
Anyway, help will be appreciated. Thanks in advance. Sam
Earlier I'd asked for tech help regarding how to set an H&K AR so that it could be switched to auto and still appear legal. Thanks for the good advice on that, and the recommendations are in this section.
I really don't want to post the chapters here because they contain strong language and I don't want to bowderlize the text, so I've got a PDF excerpt that I can email you.
If anyone would care to have a look at this sequence, I'd greatly appreciate. Just PM me with your email and I'll send you the excerpt.
All comments will be absorbed and taken to heart, believe me. I value the feedback I always get here, because it's the best!
If only a couple people take me up on this, I may then create a PG-rated version and post it in this thread.
Anyway, help will be appreciated. Thanks in advance. Sam
Outside of a dog, a book is a man’s best friend. Inside of a dog, it’s too dark to read. - Groucho Marx
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